The animation has a really nice flow. And a very special story too :P. The only thing I think is missing is music and a few backgrounds. 5/5 and 8/10
I strayed away from backgrounds for the most part to heighten the element of the ridiculous. Thanks for the gracious score despite our difference of opinion. I'm working on getting some sound in based on people's criticisms.
Not bad at all!
The animation has a nice flow, great for practicing!
Btw, you can always download a 30 day trial of Flash, or get a crack (and get the whole program for free :P)
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